Winter Storms"I know I shouldn't."
This is a critique for the group .
Vision: 4 stars. The vision was good in a way that the reader can see what is going on in their heads. However there were some areas where the picture was fuzzy.
Originality: 3.5 stars. I don't like this pairing so I never read any fanfiction for this pairing, as a result I compared the originality with other paired fanfiction I have read. It was original enough, but not so much so that I was willing to give you that extra half a star.
Technique: 4 stars. You kept them in character throughout the entire piece which is good and I would have loved to give you five stars. I didn't give you five stars though because there were parts where there was too little information for a clear picture and there were parts where it seemed a bit too rushed.
Impact: 3 stars. I didn't really get a feeling of, "Oh so that's the climax." or "Woah! Didn't expect that.".